Saturday, October 10, 2009

Sentence 2

His sentence: A mountain range of rubble was written, designed, erected around her.
from The Book Thief by Markus Zusak

This sentence has polysyndeton as well as asyndeton, describing how the rumble from the attack seemed to be everywhere around her.

My sentence: The blood-stained battlefield was littered, scattered, strewn with the mutilated bodies of the fallen.

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