Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Sentence 4

His sentence: But this was my one chance to become someone who was looked at, not seen, listened to, not heard.
from The Kite Runner by Khaled Hosseini

This sentence uses asyndeton to describe the type of person that Amir will become in his father's eyes if he wins the kite tournament.

My sentence: Now it was my turn to become the hunter, not hunted, predator, not prey.

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