Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Sentence 5

His sentence: People were stomping their feet, clapping, whistling, chanting, "Boboresh! Boboresh!"
from The Kite Runner by Khaled Hosseini

This sentence uses polysyndeton to describe all of the ways that the crowd was cheering for Amir during the kite tournament.

My sentence: The wind was whipping, raging, howling, ripping through the dark night.

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